[Sabertooth]

((((((growl)))))

[Victoria Delsoul]

Your poem seems effortless, and I get a visual image of romantic with a balanced mix of existential and sensorial elements. Ouroboros Falls, has a dynamic expression and an exalted mood. I love it.

Like children of the reeds before the flight,
Past yesterday we'll scale through croaking calls.
Our sunset hour borrows dark or light,
The precipice that parallax enthralls.
The waters' broken roar portends our plight…
Does folly swoon? We follow up the falls.

[Alamo-Girl]

Kudos, Sabertooth! Thank you so much for another beautiful poem!

[2Trievers]

This is not the jpg I'm thinking of Toothie ... because there is a better one to give a visual ... but nothing fits the riverlettes of mind images to match your words ... even if I did find the precise one! Swimmingly delightful! &;-)

[Bigg Red]

Well done, Sabe! Engaging images and enchanting meter!