[Sabertooth]

[Sabertooth]

(((ping))))

[harpseal]

BTT

[Bloody Sam Roberts]

Impressive.

Most impressive.

[Bigg Red]

Excellent!

[shaggy eel]

,,, thanx for BUMPing these wonderful lines to me. I'm about to start work [Tuesday morning] and they've set me up for the day!

[callisto]

Tres bien, monsieur! A most impressive display of your talents. I really like the flow of the poem as it's read. A very thankful BUMP for the ping.

[Aquamarine]

Ok, this whole thing has a double meaning, right?

[Notforprophet]

Awesome! Put me on your ping list, por favor.

[Sungirl]

I need help understanding this one.....

[Ragtime Cowgirl]

Its blackened boughs bescrawled by dirty talons.
Palestinians, graffiti-covered walls of the temple mount...the olive tree in enemy territory, scorched, but standing,
The hour befalls our moments lacking count…
Soon...the Kingdom without end...
A predawn pall of dark and light imbalanced.
But first, all nations rise up (darkness) against Israel (light)...

Close?

Dang, you made me cry, Sabertooth.
Thank you for sharing such a gift.

[Neuromancer]

THE HIDDEN SUN

Dark wings cross the sky

Masters call to ancient fowl

- Roll Jordan roll by...

[.30Carbine]

This is a dark work from you, Sabertooth. I am brought into dark places in my own remembrance in the reading. This darkness surprises me, but not the power to evoke it in your word play. Thank you for the ping. I love to read your works.

[Dubya]

Thanks for this one. NICE.