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(((ping))))
To: Sabertooth
BTT
4 posted on
07/01/2002 11:36:12 AM PDT by
harpseal
To: Sabertooth
Impressive.
Most impressive.
To: Sabertooth
Excellent!
8 posted on
07/01/2002 11:50:31 AM PDT by
Bigg Red
To: Sabertooth
,,, thanx for BUMPing these wonderful lines to me. I'm about to start work [Tuesday morning] and they've set me up for the day!
To: Sabertooth
Tres bien, monsieur! A most impressive display of your talents. I really like the flow of the poem as it's read. A very thankful BUMP for the ping.
15 posted on
07/01/2002 12:29:46 PM PDT by
callisto
To: Sabertooth
Ok, this whole thing has a double meaning, right?
To: Sabertooth
Awesome! Put me on your ping list, por favor.
To: Sabertooth
I need help understanding this one.....
22 posted on
07/01/2002 4:28:43 PM PDT by
Sungirl
To: Sabertooth
Its blackened boughs bescrawled by dirty talons. Palestinians, graffiti-covered walls of the temple mount...the olive tree in enemy territory, scorched, but standing,
The hour befalls our moments lacking count
Soon...the Kingdom without end...
A predawn pall of dark and light imbalanced. But first, all nations rise up (darkness) against Israel (light)...
Close?
Dang, you made me cry, Sabertooth.
Thank you for sharing such a gift.
To: Sabertooth
THE HIDDEN SUN
Dark wings cross the sky
Masters call to ancient fowl
- Roll Jordan roll by...
To: Sabertooth
This is a dark work from you, Sabertooth. I am brought into dark places in my own remembrance in the reading. This darkness surprises me, but not the power to evoke it in your word play. Thank you for the ping. I love to read your works.
To: Sabertooth
Thanks for this one. NICE.
34 posted on
07/03/2002 6:15:16 PM PDT by
Dubya
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