[JenB]

Excellent! Incidentally, if you want to share your disjointed scenes, I'd love to see them... you could email them to me if you wanted to share.

Man, I'm kinda stuck. I mean, I know what I want to do but I can't write it out. Let's see if I can just get to a good stopping point and work on it more tomorrow.

[Overtaxed]

Well....it's kind of disjointed but so far I'm writing the same point of time from three different characters' viewpoints. I still can't decide whom to make the viewpoint character but I've got a bit of background/ motivation stuff down.