There are a few things in your script that go against the Word, such as Jesus needing help from Judas, and Judas getting a second chance to escape Hell because he was “basically a good person.” That could confuse people about the Truth which clearly speaks against these things. The bigger problem is using the Creator, the Holy King who laid down His life for us to save us, for entertainment purposes through irreverent speculation and presenting creative liberties could dishonor Him and even lead people astray. That was the problem with Jesus Christ Superstar, which came across as crass and disrespectful. Some things are so holy we shouldn’t go there. I think you meant well but don’t realize how spiritually dangerous it is.
You make very good points. I thank you for that.
Jesus ‘got help’ carrying the cross