To: Tolerance Sucks Rocks
Attention Madeline: Here's what your opening paragraph should have said. Much better than burying this info in the second to last 'graph:
Joseph Putzulu, 55, was charged with two felony counts of burglary of an unoccupied structure and one count of third-degree grand theft.
Ya been there 10 years and this is a sample of your work? Gotta feel sorry for your readers.
16 posted on
08/12/2023 7:26:47 AM PDT by
upchuck
(EV owners should ONLY be able to charge their cars with wind and solar, otherwise it's just pretend.)
To: upchuck
"Attention Madeline: Here's what your opening paragraph should have said."
The "Five Ws" of journalism: Who, What, When, Where, Why.
By the way, reporters usually don't write their headlines.
20 posted on
08/12/2023 8:18:35 AM PDT by
Hiddigeigei
("Talk sense to a fool and he calls you foolish," said Dionysus - Euripides)
To: upchuck
Joseph Putzulu, 55, was charged with two felony counts of burglary of an unoccupied structure and one count of third-degree grand theft.Aaaaaannnnd, here he is!
21 posted on
08/12/2023 9:17:05 AM PDT by
Albion Wilde
(Either ‘the Deep State destroys America, or we destroy the Deep State.’ --Donald Trump)
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