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To: real saxophonist

A few commas would be helpful


32 posted on 12/15/2018 5:37:52 AM PST by HangnJudge
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To: HangnJudge

Commas would not help, unless accompanied by a change in syntax: the position of adverbs and adverbial phrases and clauses is extremely important.

The best version would be, “At funeral, priest criticizes teen who killed himself.”


60 posted on 12/15/2018 6:54:49 AM PST by Tax-chick (Ask me about my Marine!)
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