[GeronL]

Playing Games With Planets

http://flscifi.blogspot.com/2015/07/short-story-playing-games-with-planets.html

[Tax-chick]

Very good. You really are gifted with plots and scenarios, which is the more important aspect of fiction.

However, if you don’t mind my saying so, you have comma splices.

[moose07]

Thanks Geron.
Have ‘borrowed’ it ,to read off-line later. :)