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To: GeronL

Very good. You really are gifted with plots and scenarios, which is the more important aspect of fiction.

However, if you don’t mind my saying so, you have comma splices.

3,445 posted on 07/29/2015 1:16:07 PM PDT by Tax-chick ("All the time live the truth with love in your heart." ~Fr. Ho Lung)

To: Tax-chick

I have too little comma sense!

3,446 posted on 07/29/2015 1:17:47 PM PDT by GeronL

To: Tax-chick

Comma me bro!

lol

3,451 posted on 07/29/2015 1:25:01 PM PDT by GeronL

To: Tax-chick; GeronL

Comma, comma, comma, comma, comma chameleon.
The one I know, the one I wrooooote!
Comma will get me if comma don’t like my writ!

3,462 posted on 07/29/2015 1:52:28 PM PDT by Darksheare (Those who support liberal "Republicans" summarily support every action by same.)

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