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To: Explorer89

OK. Now that is good writing. Much more believable.

22 posted on 05/03/2012 5:42:40 AM PDT by NeoCaveman ("If I had a son he'd look like B.O.'s lunch" - Rin Tin Tin)

To: NeoCaveman

(I was channeling my 20-year-old self journal writing. Most of it was a diatribe like the above example. ;P )

24 posted on 05/03/2012 5:44:42 AM PDT by Explorer89 (And now, let the wild rumpus start!!)

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