G’night, Sweetie! G’night, Mr. Harmless!
*HUG*
But it got rejected bvecause of bad grammer, punctuation as well as spelling errors
When I was in school (I'm a High School graduate) I used to get As and Bs in English and grammer.
But that was over 30 years ago. I think I need a refresher coarse before continuing with the real novel I'm trying to work on. that piece of fan fiction was just for practice and to see what needs improving.