To: JenB
It has lots of subtle things to think about... beyond passive voice and “ly” adverbs. It’s good!
8,766 posted on
11/28/2007 9:43:33 AM PST by
Lil'freeper
(Don't taze me, bro! [[NaNoWriMo Winnah! WoCo: 57436/50K]])
To: Lil'freeper
Most excellent. I need to do a search-and-destroy on weak adjectives but I’m pretty good with the basics, I need useful stuff.
8,770 posted on
11/28/2007 10:37:08 AM PST by
JenB
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