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To: RosieCotton

What if you did his part in third person and don't show everything he thinks? Might that help? Make it more distant than the other POV.


1,711 posted on 12/29/2004 12:00:11 PM PST by JenB
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To: JenB

Even without what he thinks...he would be hearing and seeing things that I haven't revealed in her POV. It's inevitable. She doesn't have a clue about her past...he's a part of her past, in a way.

I guess if I wait to throw him in until after she's had more revelation, it could work. It'll be tricky...but I do like the idea of it.


1,712 posted on 12/29/2004 12:02:39 PM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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