In your story or in mine?
In yours...I only read the first chapter and a tiny bit of the second.
In my story, I have a lot to type out of my notebook...something like 25 notebook pages. Not sure how many words that adds up to - maybe 5000? Bringing it to just under 10k total so far. I imagine I'll hit about 40k in the end.
40k... with a little trimming it could be a solid short story.