Actually when I finish the next chapter, I will be at the halfway point - call it the "Han Solo is Frozen in Carbonite, Frodo's in the Tower, and Your Mother Wants to Know what Happened to her Car" moment of the story. Mwahaha. Anyway, what I was saying is that at that point I'd love to have you take a look.
I'm pretty much done on your story... man, I don't have many comments at all, but it's a very good children's story, I really think! Actually, with some gentle... ok, some really brutal editing, I think it might be publishable. Or at least, rejectable - we need to start collecting rejection slips, girl!
Cool! I'd like that.
Actually, with some gentle... ok, some really brutal editing, I think it might be publishable. Or at least, rejectable - we need to start collecting rejection slips, girl!
You really think so? Hm...I wouldn't mind a rejection slip, just to say I tried! Heh...
I wouldn't know where to start. But it would be fun if we both started at least attempting to get published at the same time, wouldn't it?