I'm hoping to get it finished (this version) sometime in the next few months, and then yes, I'd like you to read it. It's a very complicated story that I am not telling right. But if I can just get it out, all the way out, once.... I've got 50k, and it'll probably take another 50 to finish, and I know there are some scenes that I just can't write yet. But I'm getting better. This version is better than the last one.
Practice makes perfect, no? ;-)
I love the complexity of your stories. Circles within circles. That's something I don't know if I'll ever be able to do. But the more I do write, the easier the ideas seem to come.