Oh well, take 'em where you can get 'em.
Your answers are excellent!
#3: change
"....General Patraius, that I believe can..."
to "General Patraius, WHO I believe can...".
I took your grammar correction and added the WHO. I also found a couple of other errors in spelling that I changed.
I took out the 'fringe islamist terrorists' and that Bill Clinton even agreed with our free trade.
Oh, I also took out the 'Democrats and republicans don't want to budget cut the pork, but left cutting pork.
I am sure that many will think that my stances are too harsh, but I just refuse to be wishy washy.