[JenB]

Hey Fedora... got your email... thank you! I'll write back to you later, after I've had a detailed read and am done at work (sometime this evening). And some good news, I've got a whole fourth chapter, with real live action - at least a little bit.

I'd love to see something from you, in return... hint hint...

[Fedora]

I'd love to see something from you, in return... hint hint...

I'm workin' on it! :) The first two chapters are okay, maybe I'll send you those while I'm editing the rest.