[JenB]

Maybe, if you're willing, I'll send you the first three chapters (which are in rough draft form, finished - sort of - but not polished) and you can look at it... I have three viewpoint characters and they take turns with the chapters. All in third-person, but I needed a couple different perspectives on things.

Heading home, then doing my run, having dinner, and I'll be back. Unless I get banned for meanness.

[Fedora]

Sure, send me the first three chapters and I'll go over them! Talk to you later.