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To: Camachee; bentfeather; January24th

Night things

Cicadas click
moon dips
doors whisper
closed
making a noise
for time.

Dark slips
its fingered grip
inside a glove
that delineates
its invisible hand

night procedes
ignoring
the no wake sign
and rocks
the loosely moored
till they free
themselves from
restraint

and boats
shake their
harbour tethers
to follow
the tide
at dawn.


689 posted on 08/12/2004 4:32:40 PM PDT by Kay Syrah (nice finish)
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To: Kay Syrah
Dark slips
its fingered grip
inside a glove
that delineates
its invisible hand


Oh gorgeous.
691 posted on 08/12/2004 5:27:12 PM PDT by Soaring Feather
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To: Kay Syrah
You have a marvelous way with words evidenced throught this entire thread. It is enticing, beguiling, and mood altering to read your work. Thank you.

Bind them together and have them printed. Many will benefit. At least it would be a thrilling prospect ...

693 posted on 08/13/2004 12:27:11 PM PDT by Countyline
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