Posted on 11/24/2003 9:52:48 AM PST by January24th
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Sunset
Fiery culmination of Day's
anticipation,
Meeting Night on
reluctant terms,
Day surrenders
to his
sweet nocturne
but not without
fierce protestations.
Her attending maids fiercely blush
with knowing pleasure, and
usher her to his ebony chambers
strewing their retreat
with glittering gems and sighs
what strange
precipice
looms
beyond
reach
in an untimely
snow
we were stranded
in a square
where the musician
fingered an erhu
coaxing from two strings
that never meet haunting
vocalisings tho we didn't realise
the ambassadorial value of
the artful bowing
that teased the threads
to harmony while hoping for
the ping of a coin
tossed into the open
invitation to converge.
punctuated by the dinging
of the mercantile thunk
that seemed to be the reason
for all music , still
there was a delicacy we
understood in plein air
but closed to interpretation
we chose under it's influence
a direction, from the intersection
and remembered the tune that played
when destination wasn't critical and
and the choice of streets
that never meet
remained
underplayed
still silent gestures
lines amount to admissions
easels too far back
portraits in winter
he knew
appeasement
as an understated
surrender
to daily chores
and the singular
snores
of separate
beds
your desire
is the source
of my
sighs
sensibility
is the logic
of a plurality
awaiting
a winner
natural seasons
outrun their borders
eclipsing the
solstice standards
rain in May
wind in July
late-seeming
Autumn breezes
snow in October
tumbling the necessary
fences that make
seasons
good neighbors
we expected
to leave galoshes
and slickers
by the door
another month more
untimely time
looms large
reminding us
we're not in charge
cusp-like air
swirls
nature's
denouement
not all reasons
are seasonal
and break upon
the edges of
expected changes,
across the dew draped
diamond shattered grass,
the repeated retreat
of hope leaves traces
of footsteps that
remind us of
the path,
continued
forth and back.
hearing
his coming
she prepared
her heart
with shadows
of fall
i know
the nature
of your nights
plights
that don't end
in a dream
Yogurt is to milk..
Like it matters
could be conveyed
in the oat meal
congealing in the
bowl, its milky
iridescence revealing
the essence of the universe,
our band of stars
in which we head
infinitely away
from collision in
our own colloidal
suspension
without solution
or perspective
tho contained by
cultural textures
of earnest tinctures
and solar system
solipsisms,
we remain
without admission
an omission
to the particular
way we understand
the nature of decay
what a way to start
a day.
Man, I hate it when that happens! LOL!! It must be Monday...
halloween's harvest
sweet destruction incomplete
snickers for breakfast.
imperfect moon
linger
share
these
days
lingering in
incompletely
committed arms,
waxing and waning
sweet seasons of doubt
glide to gibbous
promise and beyond
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