Posted on 11/24/2003 9:52:48 AM PST by January24th
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imagine
if you were
a cat
and i
a scratch
It just gets hotter
we leave but
a blue suggestion upon
the negotiable edge
of sand and surf
and thinning to transparency
the regular waves
wonder at the impression
of the rhythmic assault
that gives and takes.
adamant, we create
a transitory ecology
in the splash zone
that flanges our expectations
with anticipated guard changes
and tropical intimations
of theoretical seasons.
well, heck, I'm offline trying to compose and missing all the action. Looks like I'm hillbilly waltzer. LOL.
The dance of time is really all we have but I really love the colours that you guys bring to it.
You do very well yourself you know! :-)
well.....OK dear. :^].
Catalytic converter
I am exhausted and more
than a few ions short
of a charge,
but my cat hums
on my lap,
contentedly
tuned and ready
with environmental
equipment designed
to affect a climate change
and accelerate
exacerbate global
purring.
You are so clever! Good poem.
form
the abstract
shape of the pottery vase
contains the space
it imitates
but cannot imagine the hours
of emptiness that create
the original idea of flowers
someone stole my fountain
the base metal
of wanting is
a new bill of lading
that means this journey
of course starts free on board
and a new destination awaits
there is a silver
puddle left
of wishing water
which normally accepted
to be splashed by a coin
with its prepaid freight of desire
or tickled as an after thought
as I passed it by,
dipping my fingers
into its current affairs thinking
wouldnt it be nice
.
But it was efficient as
it circulated
and I think Ill miss
its dependable chuckle,
the carefree caressing of the stones
over which it flowed
like a really smooth guy
whos always ready
with an appropriate reply
for everyone who wants one
and is willing to wait
for some action,
The silence of its absence
is unbearable.
i saw a nude
prudish
but erudite
in the shyness
of erotica
welcoming a look
while stifling
a smile
how should i feel
a rum-silent
so secure
smile
her back
was painted
a madress
madness
i feared
would stain
the sheet
complete
with gods
and images
with which
i could not
compete
half moon reflections
azure speaks for my soul
the rest is wanting
you
let me
loose
to imagine
the difference
between
red sheets
What happened here
Some ghosts persist
in stalking the coasts
of ruined civilizations,
as if the shades of past
indiscretions are destinations
sufficient for itineraries
and attempts to alter
planned intentions are charged
with penalties that render
changed minds
a prohibitive expense.
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