ping
There is a simple solution for this problem.
“...missed it by thhatt much.”
“Who What When Where Why and How”
You need some meet, in the FIRST paragraph.
Also, no introductions necessary, just GET TO THE POINT!
Tell us what you are going to tell us.
Tell us.
Tell us what you told us!
This is a good story, very newsworthy, upsetting but -—
Also annoying to read!