How about this ?
Those who believe that Jesus is the Son of God ...
... are born of God,
... will love God and those others begotten of God,
... and will keep His commandments.
Correction!
How about this ?
Those who believe that Jesus is the Son of God ...
... are born of God,
... will love God and those others begotten of God,
... will keep His commandments,
... and will overcome the world.
I'm all for that. Nonetheless, keeping the commandments is still a part of overcoming. :-)