You are oh, so correct...I already corrected my mistake. I answered before I had done the same type of comparison.
But do you have another version showing that the Church had re-written the original? And if not, what ever prompted you to make such a charge in the first place?
If you are relying on the various anti-Mormon web sites for your information, you should be aware that many (perhaps most) are unreliable. The professional anti-Mormons—those who make a living "debunking" Mormonism—cannot be trusted to give an accurate account of Mormonism. For example, the site you quoted before about the witnesses to the Book of Mormon contains a number of errors.