I hope to have time to reconstruct it in an 'unbiased' or even pro-Simon format later today.
Great job with what you've done so far at #7, 11, 13.
If you continue, repost the completed job as a vanity and then link to it from this thread.
"While Simon held numerous press conferences to blast what he called a "pay to play" atmosphere in the Davis administration, the bulk of the media attention remained focused on the governor." REWRITE: While Simon held numerous press conferences to blast what he called a "pay to play" atmosphere in the Davis administration, the bulk of the biased media attention remained focused on blindly loyal to the governor.