FTA:Four Connecticut carjacking suspects flee scene after woman yells they were calling the police.
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Why were the carjackers calling police? Why was a woman yelling that they would do so?
Is it too much to ask that these “journalists” display a familiarity with elementary composition skills?Bloody idiots w/ a pronoun fetish. Usually it's a problem with ambiguous participles, but here the headline would be perfectly clear with the correct, third-person singular pronoun reference:
FTA:Four Connecticut carjacking suspects flee scene after woman yellsHad to correct the tense-shift, and a relative pronoun "that" would be helpful...they wereshe is calling the police.