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To: bitt

FTA:Four Connecticut carjacking suspects flee scene after woman yells they were calling the police.

“””””

Why were the carjackers calling police? Why was a woman yelling that they would do so?


Is it too much to ask that these “journalists” display a familiarity with elementary composition skills?


55 posted on 04/16/2023 12:20:35 PM PDT by Bigg Red (Trump will be sworn in under a shower of confetti made from the tattered remains of the Rat Party.)
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To: Bigg Red
Is it too much to ask that these “journalists” display a familiarity with elementary composition skills?
Bloody idiots w/ a pronoun fetish. Usually it's a problem with ambiguous participles, but here the headline would be perfectly clear with the correct, third-person singular pronoun reference:
FTA:Four Connecticut carjacking suspects flee scene after woman yells they were she is calling the police.
Had to correct the tense-shift, and a relative pronoun "that" would be helpful...
63 posted on 04/16/2023 4:39:17 PM PDT by nicollo ("I said no!")
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