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To: Robert DeLong
After recovering from a fractured skull and a brain bleed inflicted by the mother of the victim’s boyfriend

I think that sentence needs to be rewritten for clarity as:

After recovering from a fractured skull and a brain bleed inflicted by the boyfriend of the victim’s mother (the victim was a little girl).
Writing quality has really suffered after the invention of the internet. No one uses editors anymore.
11 posted on 12/30/2018 8:07:58 AM PST by RoosterRedux
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To: RoosterRedux
I agree wholeheartedly, and admit that I struggled with what exact was being stated, but are you even sure that you have deciphered it correctly?

They never identified Jose as the boyfriend of a woman or that he bashed the head of the girl that he molested while babysitting her. At least not in this account. Are you getting your information from a different source?

12 posted on 12/30/2018 8:16:50 AM PST by Robert DeLong
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