[Tax-chick]

In mandatory townhalls.

LOL! You and Tom the Son ...

Many writers, even some in syndication, don't ever reach the point of a creative premise, a solid argument, effective organization, and clear (if not technically perfect) composition.

You're doing excellently!

[Lazamataz]

Thank you, madam. I asked for the corrections, then wilted in shame when they were proferred. LOL

I shall take your criticism and grow. :)