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To: Kaslin
While Parker is now backpedaling on her unconstitutional sermon subpoenas faster than a dyslexic cyclist in the Four de Trance, she is, nonetheless, pushing ahead like Lance Armstrong on steroids with her unlawful subversion of Houston’s citizen petition process (arbitrarily tossing out nearly three-quarters of the already validated petition signatures needed to put her utterly insane gender-neutral “bathroom bill” up for a vote by the very people whose privacy it sexually assaults).

That is one HELLISH "sentence." Our side needs to write and edit better if we are to convince others of our cause.

4 posted on 11/02/2014 9:28:28 AM PST by montag813
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To: montag813

I agree.

I was reading along just fine but that passage hit me like a pothole in the bikeway. ;’)


10 posted on 11/02/2014 9:56:41 AM PST by rockrr (Everything is different now...)
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To: montag813

It may be long, but what is wrong with the sentence?


11 posted on 11/02/2014 9:58:14 AM PST by muglywump (Seven days without laughter makes one weak.)
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To: montag813

All the sentence needs is “by” in front of “arbitrarily”, and ditching the ().


14 posted on 11/02/2014 10:03:11 AM PST by Mr Rogers
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