To: TalBlack
someone who never got past Junior High School.Actually, if he turned this essay into me, a sixth grade English teacher, I would give him a 0. Every sentence must have a subject and a predicate. It must be a complete thought, able to stand on its own. One sentence fragment dooms the whole paper. The writer of this screed has more than one dependent clause pretending to be a thought.
I'll leave others to judge the content.
46 posted on
07/10/2012 3:47:56 AM PDT by
Jemian
To: Jemian
Stay back, or I’ll splash you with Holy Water ;o)
49 posted on
07/10/2012 3:54:26 AM PDT by
papertyger
("And how we burned in the camps later, thinking: What would things have been like if..."))
To: Jemian
The writer of this screed has more than one dependent clause pretending to be a thought.
I just took it as a bad attempt at free verse.
54 posted on
07/10/2012 4:00:50 AM PDT by
Dr. Sivana
("Stronger. You see? You see? Your stupid minds! Stupid! Stupid! "--Eros, Plan 9 From Outer Space)
To: Jemian
Its those damn conservative “principals”.
55 posted on
07/10/2012 4:01:19 AM PDT by
cripplecreek
(What does it profit a man if he gains the whole world but loses his soul?)
To: Jemian
Shouldn't that be "if he turned this essay in to me"? An essay cannot "turn into" a person.... ;~)
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