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To: discostu

Like David Copperfield?


54 posted on 03/27/2012 9:57:19 AM PDT by Mach9
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To: Mach9

Copperfield sort of touches it because you get the idea that he’s actively telling you the story now. But most of the story is in the past. Most of the time you see present tense it’s in spy stories, it adds a lot of immediacy to the story, especially if it’s first person. First person past tense you always have the nagging feeling that the narrator lived through the current scene because he’s telling you it happened in the past, move it to present tense and the poor slob could die at any time, of course they don’t but it feels that way.


58 posted on 03/27/2012 10:17:27 AM PDT by discostu (I did it 35 minutes ago)
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