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To: ColdOne

Horrible writing:

Elisa Baker was convicted of second-degree murder last year in the death of Zahra, who had a prosthetic leg and hearing aids from a battle with cancer.

^^^
What in the heck does that sentence actually mean?


9 posted on 01/30/2012 1:57:18 PM PST by Bigg Red (Pray for our republic.)
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To: Bigg Red

At a guess, Zahra had had bone cancer in her leg which required amputation, and suffered hearing loss from the chemotherapy.

Of course, even with that stated more clearly, it would still be a badly written sentence.


12 posted on 01/30/2012 3:19:13 PM PST by heartwood
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