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To: Natural Law; metmom
You put out a sentence like this and complain that the Church has a communication problem? Just wow! I'll bet if you diagram that sentence it will look like that Presbyterian schism chart that shows up here every so often.

As a former seventh grade English teacher as well as a copy editor, I think she did a good job with that sentence.

1,423 posted on 09/06/2011 10:53:38 PM PDT by boatbums ( God is ready to assume full responsibility for the life wholly yielded to Him.)
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To: boatbums
As a former seventh grade English teacher as well as a copy editor, I think she did a good job with that sentence."

As a former seventh grader I can assure you that Sister Mary Catherine would not have been pleased. I do concede, tough, that junior high level thoughts are probably best described with junior high level grammar.

1,550 posted on 09/07/2011 7:58:48 AM PDT by Natural Law (For God so loved the world He did not send a book.)
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