Reread the excerpt I posted from the article. The light may go on regarding the "really greatly". You also, without realizing it, have supported my assertion. Then again it was nullified by the post to both of us from Dr. Kopp. He explained that this is a transcript from a spoken presentation. I was not aware of that until he posted it. It explains the awkwardness of the text.
Exactly, which is what I said all along. Before I even knew that it was a transcript of a speech, I said it was “conversational.” It was very obvious to me, and I liked it.