[70times7]

I am reading this. You, sir, are an excellent writer.

The name "Janet Smith" appears 3 times before one even gets to the end of the intro.

You may agree with what she is saying but she says it very poorly.

[Paved Paradise]

Are you kidding? I think she says it very well. Her writing is conversational and I like that. I am so used to academic writing and reading scholarly journals that it was like a breath of fresh air. And, FWIW, I am very tired so I overlooked the true author in the first bit.

I have no idea why you think she says it poorly. Maybe you could do better?