I'm sorry, two howlers like that and I don't believe this writer is actually a lawyer. (Or else it says "dictated but not read" in the memo line at the bottom.)
He doesn't do himself any favors by having such egregious errors in the letter.
He doesn't have the form of address right either.
Well yes, but we laity don't always get it right.
What is the proper form of address for a Druid priest?