[jellybean]

Now you've made me cry...

That's just as beautiful in a different way. Doesn't sound cynical at all to me.

[djf]

Funny that this thread got started last night. Last week I bumped into someone (the woman "Should I" was written for), and one of the first things she asked was if I had been writing.
So I stumbled around for a coupla daze, and finally two words popped into my head, after that it took me two hours. I emailed it to a few people, including a freeper, who described it at "remarkably sensitive, and palpably erotic"

The best thing I've written so far. I handed a printed copy of it last nite to the lady in question, and get home, and this thread had been started.
Odd sometimes how things work.