[AmericanInTokyo]

Great!

You just needed to 'upper case' the "he" refering to Christ in the final sentence. (picky, picky, picky)... otherwise, excellent work!

[Antoninus]

You just needed to 'upper case' the "he" refering to Christ in the final sentence. (picky, picky, picky)... otherwise, excellent work!

Doggone it! I proofed that thing about 15 times too. MSWord can detect and correct all kinds of mistakes - Microsoft could probably make some good money if they came up with a verison specifically for Christian documents.