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Terror at Foothill Mall: Excerpt from Trodden Under, Volume Two of Jeff Head's Dragon's Fury Series
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| March 11, 2002
| Jeff Head
Posted on 03/11/2002 9:40:20 AM PST by Jeff Head
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To: JohnHuang2
John, how about the venerable JH2 "mega-ping" for this thread?
Regards and BUMP'ed to you.
To: Jeff Head
they are currently being reviewed/edited How are you handling that, Jeff? Paid editor? Friend?
Curious minds want to know.
MM
To: MississippiMan
They are listed on the acknowledgements. Several are FReepers helping out.
If a major publishing house picks it up, they will of course provide highly specialized staff to do it more thoroughly as a part of their contract.
Having said that, the folks helping me now are a real God send and I couldn't be more grateful to them for their help.
To: Luis Gonzalez
Got to be ... I set a schedule for myself and now I have to keep it.
Just hope I wasn't too agressive! LOL!
To: harpseal
Got the fixes and suggestions. Thanks!
Will have a corrected and updated version on my site tomorrow.
To: Jeff Head
Don't buy it then. The operative word here _Jim is "fiction". With all due respect, Jeff, seems you took offense where none was intended from what I saw in Jim's post. Remember, you have asked people to let you know what they think, and it's impossible for any writer to improve if they're not wide open to constructive criticism, which is exactly what I interpreted his comments to be. You should see the comments given in writers' groups where real critiquing is taking place.
Best of luck to you with it.
MM
To: jimtorr
I probably should have added that they also forward the order information, so you can ship the product. Yep, I used Americart.com for a long time on an e-commerce site of mine, until the volume warranted going with a solution that has realtime processing. At that point I went with a Yahoo! store, which was easy to get set up.
MM
To: nocurrentfreeperbythatname
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To: MississippiMan
There's a long history with _Jim. I won't go into it in detail or bore you with it, but after about three years of interaction with him, it is painfully obvious (at least from my perspective) that he's not attempting "constructive" critisism. If I have misjudged, then my apologies to all on this thread and to _Jim.
IN fact, either way, I am sorry I snapped back at him on this thread. I don't characteristically do that. I suppose I just got fed up and typed a littly too hastily.
I am more than open to constructive crticism and have received a lot over the last six months that has improved my material dramatically.
In fact, I have updated this excerpt a good bit as a result of a number of emails and this thread. You can see the "developing" result at:
http://www.dragonsfury-breathoffire.com/vol2sample1.htm
Anyhow, thanks for the gentle "nudge".
To: harpseal; sneakypete; Travis McGee; Dukie; Joanie-f; Lurker; Luis Gonzalez
To: bootless
To: NoCurrentFreeperByThatName
BUMP'ed back at you.
To: joanie-f
Hey Joanie, got your email. Working through it now.
By the way, WHSmith, a Book Supplier in England now has both of the Ebook versions (Adobe and MSReader) up on their ebook site.
Here's the link:
Dragon's Fury - Breath of Fire on WHSmith
To: MississippiMan
Thanks for the Fremail.
BTW, in addition to Amazon and Barnes and Nobles, I was just informed that the book is now available on WHSmith in the UK now (Ebooks only at this point) at:
WHSmith link
The more the merrier.
Regards.
To: Jeff Head
Congrats on another outlet, Jeff.
MM
To: MississippiMan
Thank you. Doug at PocketPCPress is publishing the MSReader version. The link above to WHSmit expired, but the two links to the Adobe (Published by Alpha Connections which is my own DBA) and MSReader (Published by PocketPCPress) are here:
Adobe Version on WHSmith
MSReader version on WHSmith
Thjanks again for your input and advise.
To: Jeff Head
S&H=4.50 US no Euro's thank you anyway :) Got your response. Thanks. Book order in the mail as of this AM. Keep that pen rolling. Your style is what's been lacking in American literature... Love the part where the Lt-Leo keeps thinking ..."thank god those Civilians showed up or my butt would be as dead as those other Leo's" ... So timely after the cops were refused entracnce to public places because they were packin' .... Gotta love it ... is this England.??? Har -Har - Har.. Stay safe .... Mark
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posted on
03/14/2002 7:05:36 AM PST
by
Marobe
To: Marobe
I look forward to sending you a book. I believe you will find it an enjoyable, engrossing and thought provoking read. Please let me know your thoughts once you have read it ... and, if you are so inclined, consider placing a review on the Amazon link.
Book Two, from which this excerpt is pulled, will be available in late May.
Regards.
To: Jeff Head
Wow! Great Work! It makes me want to read more of the book. Thanks and best wishes.
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posted on
03/14/2002 7:49:06 AM PST
by
BearPaw1
To: BearPaw1
This is an excerpt from book two of the series.
If you haven't already, you can read about book one which has been available for several months at it's site:
Dragon's Fury - Breath of Fire
It's available there and on Amazon, among other places.
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