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THE RAID: New Fiction from the War On Domestic Terrorism
www.sit-rep.com ^ | February 24, 2002 | Travis McGee

Posted on 02/26/2002 12:59:26 PM PST by Travis McGee

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To: Travis McGee
You bastard! Don't give me anymore of the storyline. You're blowing it! damn you.
81 posted on 02/27/2002 7:39:17 AM PST by TheErnFormerlyKnownAsBig
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To: Jeff Head
I'm betting the kid gets away and not the dad. But I wouldn't bet more than a nickel on it.
82 posted on 02/27/2002 7:41:12 AM PST by TheErnFormerlyKnownAsBig
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To: Dukie
Believe me, this book has been occupying 60% of my brain for the last year at least. I have "missed" and nailed my forehead on door frames twice in the last month, so lost in thought, and my wife sometimes thinks I am losing it! It really becomes an "alternate world" which your mind inhabits.
83 posted on 02/27/2002 8:10:23 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: NoCurrentFreeperByThatName
Thanks! I am hoping for a summertime launch.
84 posted on 02/27/2002 8:13:08 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Wolfie
And to think that was the Modesto SWAT officer's SECOND NEGLIGENT DISCHARGE KILLING!

He's probably still doing raids with that shotgun.

85 posted on 02/27/2002 8:15:14 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: fnord
I hope to finish by May and publish soon after.
86 posted on 02/27/2002 8:16:19 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
Well, as luck would have it, the first AD was into an already dead suspect. (yeah, right!)
87 posted on 02/27/2002 8:16:28 AM PST by Wolfie
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To: big ern
From post 34, I'd say a child from his first marriage, not Valerie in the house.

Looks like the whole family in that house goes down ...

Don't want to know more at this point ... gotta read it to find out now.

Regards.

88 posted on 02/27/2002 8:16:39 AM PST by Jeff Head
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To: big ern
Just remember to take the battery out of your cell phone when practicing "the art of the cache!"
89 posted on 02/27/2002 8:17:36 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Cap'n Crunch
"too soon old, too late smart.

The story of my life!!!

BTW, how'd I do on the transportation, call signs, commo, and house clearing? Freepmail me, so I won't be too humiliated, and I'll fix it up for the book.

90 posted on 02/27/2002 8:20:06 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: WALLACE212
If it's not already part of our "secret history"....think Vince Foster, Ruby Ridge etc.
91 posted on 02/27/2002 8:21:33 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: big ern
Okay, but I am going to post the roadblock chapter, it's sort of a separate vignette witnnessed by the protagonists. Reading it will not blow the plot.
92 posted on 02/27/2002 8:23:05 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Howie
The amazing thing is that Modesto SWAT cop got not one but TWO N.D. shootings, and he's still on duty as far as I know!
93 posted on 02/27/2002 8:25:28 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
Just read the whole excerpt including the sit-rep part.....boy howdy .....it was great.....I forwarded to a few friends who I thought might like it as well. I hope you don't mind.

I want to know what Edmonds is going to do now?.....and are any of the bad guys gonna flip cause they can't stomach the stuff they're doing? Driving in the dark and full speed ....boy that brought back some old memories best forgotten.

We're all all waitng. Nice job.

Regards

94 posted on 02/27/2002 8:37:35 AM PST by wardaddy
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To: Wolfie;Joe Brower;howie;squantos;sneakypete;harpseal;maica;Freee-dame;Jeff Head;Lazamataz
Well, as luck would have it, the first AD was into an already dead suspect. (yeah, right!)

The BATF, on a "compliance visit" to a gunshop after hours in Sacramento (or Fresno, I can't recall exactly) shot the gun store owner about 5 times with their 9mms, and he was dead.

But get this (TRUE STORY! I SWEAR!!!!) their story which was backed up by their friendly coroner was that:

/1/ The crazed owner was going for a .45. (Not one he ever used or carried. A "shop gun".)

/2/ The BATF agents, fearing for their lives, drew their weapons.

/3/ The gun store owner put the gun to his temple and shot himself with his right hand, (even though he was left handed.)

/4/ The BATF agents, in full draw and unable to stop, shot him also, 4 or 5 times.

/5/ But since the gun store owner was "already dead" at the second their bullets struck him (!!!!????) there was no killing by the BATF. They were just "shooting a corpse", who just happened to pick up a counter gun and kill himself with his "off hand" much to their surprise. And since the coroner agreed with that scenario, there was not even a grand jury, nothing.

And who cares? He was only a scum of the earth gun seller, a "merchant of death", so good riddance, right?

All the above is the truth. It really happened in real life, not in a novel.

(But I think those two BATF agents are pretty good STU material, don't you agree?)

95 posted on 02/27/2002 8:38:40 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
Gee, thanks, Travis. I'm going to sleep alot better tonight...

Really, looking foreward to the finished product.

FReegards

96 posted on 02/27/2002 8:43:06 AM PST by MileHi
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To: Travis McGee
Based solely on the BATF's behaviors over the last two decades, it is apparent that their behaviors, in comparison with the STUs in your novel, are much more like than unlike. Not that they alone in their Gestapo tactics. The FBIs HRT comes to mind...
97 posted on 02/27/2002 8:52:28 AM PST by Joe Brower
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To: wardaddy,sneakypete,cap'n crunch
I'm not going to tell you specifically what happens to anybody, I don't want to spoil the plot any more.

Nobody has second thoughts or flips from the STU because they are all hand-selected misfits and "good ole boys roundup" types picked for their aversion to paper work and "going by the book". They are thirty former Rangers, SEALs, Marine Recon etc who "only care about results". They don't do investigations, "that's not my department". They just "take out terrorists" who they truly believe really are terrorists. They leave investigation and target selection to others.

And they don't mind a little "collateral damage" like Edmonds' family, because "it's a war! In a war, the only rule is to win!"

This is the result of creating federal SWAT teams directly from men who were Rangers and SEALs the year before: it's a wartime mindset they bring to "law enforcement". They are used to "compartmentalization" for operational security: leaving the investigating to one unit and the raids to another makes perfect logical sense to them. The fact that this may be abused to turn them into a death squad targeting innocents to provoke a civil war does not even occur to them. They are NOT deep thinkers, they are "operators" and "shooters".

Interestingly, old Special Forces types do NOT fit into this mindset and are the natural enemy of these govt black op death squads. The old Special Forces mindset is about 180* opposed to the STU mindset, and the old Green Berets are going to be a big problem for the STU.

98 posted on 02/27/2002 8:53:24 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
out a very nice Thomson Contender pistol in .223

Geez, Travis, I have often thought that one of those could make an outstanding "urban sniper" platform. Compact, longrange accuracy.

99 posted on 02/27/2002 8:54:37 AM PST by MileHi
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To: Travis McGee
Too many cases swept under the carpet cover of suicide. ( Maybe that explains the rug fibers found all over Vince Foster ). Is it possible to establish some record indicative of sound mind as a sort of insurance against such travesties of justice ?
100 posted on 02/27/2002 8:58:40 AM PST by Dukie
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