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THE RAID: New Fiction from the War On Domestic Terrorism
www.sit-rep.com ^ | February 24, 2002 | Travis McGee

Posted on 02/26/2002 12:59:26 PM PST by Travis McGee

THE RAID

Fifteen year old Danny Edmonds was at his desk hunched over his computer keyboard clicking and typing furiously when his father came into his bedroom.

"Danny, do you know what time it is?"

"Uh, hi Dad, let's see, zero one hundred hours."

"Affirmative. Time for lights out son."

"But Dad, it's Saturday night!"

"So what's the war tonight?"

"Stalingrad."

"Which side are you?"

"I'm Russian this time."

"So what time zone is Field Marshal Von Paulus in? Maybe it's not one am in his bunker."

"Actually, his bio claims he's an Army major at Fort Campbell, so it would be midnight his time. And I'm kicking his butt clear back to the Ukraine."

"One more hour then, until two am, that's it. Tell the Field Marshal that General Zhukov's father ordered him to go to bed by then."

"Oh Dad, give me a break, he doesn't know I'm a kid." Danny's voice cracked, half way between boyhood and manliness.

"So you're whipping an active duty Army major in tactics?"

"Strategy Dad, strategy. It's corps level warfare."

"Right. Pardon me. And you still want to enlist in the Marines in three years?"

"Two Dad, two years."

"You know I won't sign for you at seventeen. Three years and you'll be on your own, free to make your own mistakes."

"Dad, I'll still be an officer, but a mustang officer! The greatest Marine officers are mustangs, prior enlisted."

It was an ongoing contest of wills between them. Burgess Edmonds could get Danny an appointment to Annapolis or West Point with one or two phone calls, but at fifteen Danny was determined to enlist in the Marines "ASAP" and get into the action as a "mud Marine" in the war.

Danny's room told the story. Where other fifteen year old boys had posters on their walls of rock groups and basketball stars, Danny had seemingly every Marine recruiting poster ever made. He had a camouflage poncho liner for a bed spread, he wore Marine combat boots to school to toughen his feet, and sitting at his desk he was wearing bright red USMC sweats, with the gold "globe and anchor" on the front and the Marine mascot bulldog on the back.

Danny was only fifteen, and Burgess had no complaints about him, not really. Danny was carrying a 3.9 GPA at Saint Paul's while lettering in wrestling and lacrosse and would have his choice of colleges, his father just hoped that his son would come around and see the benefits of accepting an appointment to a service academy after high school instead of enlisting. Danny was afraid the war would be over before he could get into it if he waited four more years: Burgess Edmonds did not share that belief, or any eagerness for his only son to experience combat. Anyway, he knew better than to push the issue. Danny and 21 year old Valerie were his "second family", and this time he was not going to blow it like he had the first time around. Maybe he'd mellowed, or maybe he'd just learned not to push them too hard.

"Okay Danny, whenever and however you do get your commission, you'll be the greatest officer the Marines ever had. Two am, all right bud?"

"All right Dad."

Burgess Edmonds turned to the hallway before Danny could see the tears welling up in his eyes. Then he slipped down the hall to Valerie's room, Valerie who was spending the weekend down from college, his little girl Valerie who had so quickly become a grown woman. Her door was slightly open, so he looked in and watched her sleeping under her quilted comforter, her golden hair spilled across her face and pillow. Where had his little girl gone, the little girl he had tucked in among teddie bears what seemed like only last week?

He went back downstairs. His wife Glennis, his second wife, was already long asleep in their bedroom at the other end of the second floor hallway from the kids' rooms.

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George Hummel was in the shotgun seat of the lead vehicle in the "Special Training Unit" raiding convoy, a black Chevy Suburban SUV with black tinted windows. It was parked on the shoulder of a dead end county service road under a covering of oak trees a mile from the Edmonds' driveway. Next to him in the driver's seat was STU "Gold Team" leader Tim Jaeger, the ex SEAL officer. Behind them in the back of the truck six more STU team members were sitting on the carpeted cargo deck: the seats had been removed for the operation to give them more room and allow faster exiting. Nearly all of them had prior service overseas with military specops units: the stripped out Suburban was just a "low flying helo" taking them to their latest battle zone as far as they were concerned. They were all wearing black tactical gear, with black kevlar helmets, black balaclava face masks, black gloves, black boots, even black Heckler and Koch MP-5 submachineguns.

Three more black Chevy Suburbans were lined up behind them. Tonight the STU Gold Team was the lead element and was taking down the house, the Blue Team was providing the snipers, the recon team, and the perimeter security. STU team on-site commander Bob Beaufort in the trailing Suburban was not masked or helmeted and was remaining at the bottom of the driveway, he would "badge" any local law enforcement which might arrive unexpectedly with his fake FBI credentials. Nothing on the STU team tonight would connect them with the BATF. This was the first time in his long career that Beaufort had carried FBI creds, the irony was delicious after years of being the subject of FBI jokes and put downs.

They all sat silent as death, watching the subdued lighting of the various screens in the front between the leaders, straining to hear their radio earphones which were turned down to a barely audible hiss. The snipers and the recon team had gone out hours before the raiding party had arrived at the forward staging area, dropped off by the STU's phoney "VEPCO" Virginia electric power van, which was now hidden nearby serving as a commo relay and electronic support unit. The "VEPCO" van was already monitoring the house's telephones and electrical usage, and would cut the phones and the ADT alarm system off just before the raid. Unknown to the Edmonds, two of their cell phones were now remotely turned on, providing the STU with audio listening devices paid for and placed in position by the Edmonds themselves.

The two man sniper teams and the recon team carried advanced 3rd generation night vision rifle scopes, thermal imagers, electronic "big ears", and "field detectors". If the Edmonds had infrared or microwave or other alarm systems on their property, then recon team "Romeo" would find and neutralize them before the raiding convoy arrived. The sniper teams with their night scopes and thermal imagers were in position to cover the flanks of the Edmonds 100 acre property, as well as the rear of the house towards the bluffs and the river.

The radio crackled in Hummel's ear, all thirty STU team men heard the report at the same time. "Gold leader, Romeo, all clear, condition zebra zebra, hush puppy."

Zebra zebra was a STU brevity code slang for "z's", meaning a sleeping house. The BATF and other federal law enforcement special response teams preferred to raid in the early hours when people were most deeply asleep. This was safest for everyone, providing the maximum shock for their "speed, surprise, and violence of action". This caused people to quit before they even had the first idea of resisting.

"Hush puppy" meant that the recon team had taken care of the Edmonds' dogs with sound suppressed weapons....

Gold Team leader Jaeger then checked his sniper teams, code named "Daniel Boone" and "Davy Crockett".

"Delta Bravo, Gold leader, sitrep."

"Gold leader, Delta Bravo ready."

"Gold leader, Delta Charlie ready."

"Gold Two ready?"

"Ready" came from the Suburban behind Hummel and Jaeger. Blue Leader and Blue Two reported in immediately after that.

Gold Leader Tim Jaeger flipped his helmet mounted night vision goggles down over his eyes. All four vehicles' engines were turned on. Jaeger hit the gas and all four blacked out vehicles ran up the service road to the county road in tight formation, fast but silent with their oversized custom mufflers. They'd all studied aerial photos of the Edmonds estate taken earlier that day from the newly acquired STU helicopter, they knew exactly where the snipers and the recon team were, they knew exactly where to park and jump out, they knew the locations of the doors and windows and who was assigned to each.

It was 2:45 am, and the STU team was conducting its first "real world" operation. They were primed, cocked, and coursing with adrenaline and testosterone. Payback for the Baltimore Massacre, and the Reston Virginia ambush of the FBI team, and the assassination of Senator Rodman and Sanderson was starting in one minute. They had all been briefed that Burgess Edmonds was the leader and financial kingpin of a shadowy right wing terrorist organization loosely hidden behind the cover of a rural hunting club in southeastern Virginia, an organization responsible for the past weeks' acts of domestic terrorism. And they all believed it: all except for Hummel in the lead Suburban, and Wally Malone, the founder of the Special Training Unit of the BATF, who was up overhead in the helicopter.

The Rest of the Story


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To: Travis McGee
You bastard! Don't give me anymore of the storyline. You're blowing it! damn you.
81 posted on 02/27/2002 7:39:17 AM PST by TheErnFormerlyKnownAsBig
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To: Jeff Head
I'm betting the kid gets away and not the dad. But I wouldn't bet more than a nickel on it.
82 posted on 02/27/2002 7:41:12 AM PST by TheErnFormerlyKnownAsBig
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To: Dukie
Believe me, this book has been occupying 60% of my brain for the last year at least. I have "missed" and nailed my forehead on door frames twice in the last month, so lost in thought, and my wife sometimes thinks I am losing it! It really becomes an "alternate world" which your mind inhabits.
83 posted on 02/27/2002 8:10:23 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: NoCurrentFreeperByThatName
Thanks! I am hoping for a summertime launch.
84 posted on 02/27/2002 8:13:08 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Wolfie
And to think that was the Modesto SWAT officer's SECOND NEGLIGENT DISCHARGE KILLING!

He's probably still doing raids with that shotgun.

85 posted on 02/27/2002 8:15:14 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: fnord
I hope to finish by May and publish soon after.
86 posted on 02/27/2002 8:16:19 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
Well, as luck would have it, the first AD was into an already dead suspect. (yeah, right!)
87 posted on 02/27/2002 8:16:28 AM PST by Wolfie
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To: big ern
From post 34, I'd say a child from his first marriage, not Valerie in the house.

Looks like the whole family in that house goes down ...

Don't want to know more at this point ... gotta read it to find out now.

Regards.

88 posted on 02/27/2002 8:16:39 AM PST by Jeff Head
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To: big ern
Just remember to take the battery out of your cell phone when practicing "the art of the cache!"
89 posted on 02/27/2002 8:17:36 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Cap'n Crunch
"too soon old, too late smart.

The story of my life!!!

BTW, how'd I do on the transportation, call signs, commo, and house clearing? Freepmail me, so I won't be too humiliated, and I'll fix it up for the book.

90 posted on 02/27/2002 8:20:06 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: WALLACE212
If it's not already part of our "secret history"....think Vince Foster, Ruby Ridge etc.
91 posted on 02/27/2002 8:21:33 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: big ern
Okay, but I am going to post the roadblock chapter, it's sort of a separate vignette witnnessed by the protagonists. Reading it will not blow the plot.
92 posted on 02/27/2002 8:23:05 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Howie
The amazing thing is that Modesto SWAT cop got not one but TWO N.D. shootings, and he's still on duty as far as I know!
93 posted on 02/27/2002 8:25:28 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
Just read the whole excerpt including the sit-rep part.....boy howdy .....it was great.....I forwarded to a few friends who I thought might like it as well. I hope you don't mind.

I want to know what Edmonds is going to do now?.....and are any of the bad guys gonna flip cause they can't stomach the stuff they're doing? Driving in the dark and full speed ....boy that brought back some old memories best forgotten.

We're all all waitng. Nice job.

Regards

94 posted on 02/27/2002 8:37:35 AM PST by wardaddy
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To: Wolfie;Joe Brower;howie;squantos;sneakypete;harpseal;maica;Freee-dame;Jeff Head;Lazamataz
Well, as luck would have it, the first AD was into an already dead suspect. (yeah, right!)

The BATF, on a "compliance visit" to a gunshop after hours in Sacramento (or Fresno, I can't recall exactly) shot the gun store owner about 5 times with their 9mms, and he was dead.

But get this (TRUE STORY! I SWEAR!!!!) their story which was backed up by their friendly coroner was that:

/1/ The crazed owner was going for a .45. (Not one he ever used or carried. A "shop gun".)

/2/ The BATF agents, fearing for their lives, drew their weapons.

/3/ The gun store owner put the gun to his temple and shot himself with his right hand, (even though he was left handed.)

/4/ The BATF agents, in full draw and unable to stop, shot him also, 4 or 5 times.

/5/ But since the gun store owner was "already dead" at the second their bullets struck him (!!!!????) there was no killing by the BATF. They were just "shooting a corpse", who just happened to pick up a counter gun and kill himself with his "off hand" much to their surprise. And since the coroner agreed with that scenario, there was not even a grand jury, nothing.

And who cares? He was only a scum of the earth gun seller, a "merchant of death", so good riddance, right?

All the above is the truth. It really happened in real life, not in a novel.

(But I think those two BATF agents are pretty good STU material, don't you agree?)

95 posted on 02/27/2002 8:38:40 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
Gee, thanks, Travis. I'm going to sleep alot better tonight...

Really, looking foreward to the finished product.

FReegards

96 posted on 02/27/2002 8:43:06 AM PST by MileHi
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To: Travis McGee
Based solely on the BATF's behaviors over the last two decades, it is apparent that their behaviors, in comparison with the STUs in your novel, are much more like than unlike. Not that they alone in their Gestapo tactics. The FBIs HRT comes to mind...
97 posted on 02/27/2002 8:52:28 AM PST by Joe Brower
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To: wardaddy,sneakypete,cap'n crunch
I'm not going to tell you specifically what happens to anybody, I don't want to spoil the plot any more.

Nobody has second thoughts or flips from the STU because they are all hand-selected misfits and "good ole boys roundup" types picked for their aversion to paper work and "going by the book". They are thirty former Rangers, SEALs, Marine Recon etc who "only care about results". They don't do investigations, "that's not my department". They just "take out terrorists" who they truly believe really are terrorists. They leave investigation and target selection to others.

And they don't mind a little "collateral damage" like Edmonds' family, because "it's a war! In a war, the only rule is to win!"

This is the result of creating federal SWAT teams directly from men who were Rangers and SEALs the year before: it's a wartime mindset they bring to "law enforcement". They are used to "compartmentalization" for operational security: leaving the investigating to one unit and the raids to another makes perfect logical sense to them. The fact that this may be abused to turn them into a death squad targeting innocents to provoke a civil war does not even occur to them. They are NOT deep thinkers, they are "operators" and "shooters".

Interestingly, old Special Forces types do NOT fit into this mindset and are the natural enemy of these govt black op death squads. The old Special Forces mindset is about 180* opposed to the STU mindset, and the old Green Berets are going to be a big problem for the STU.

98 posted on 02/27/2002 8:53:24 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
out a very nice Thomson Contender pistol in .223

Geez, Travis, I have often thought that one of those could make an outstanding "urban sniper" platform. Compact, longrange accuracy.

99 posted on 02/27/2002 8:54:37 AM PST by MileHi
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To: Travis McGee
Too many cases swept under the carpet cover of suicide. ( Maybe that explains the rug fibers found all over Vince Foster ). Is it possible to establish some record indicative of sound mind as a sort of insurance against such travesties of justice ?
100 posted on 02/27/2002 8:58:40 AM PST by Dukie
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