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To: EggsAckley
Sorry, but your second line is one syllable shy, it's only 6.

Okay then. How about "Pretty mushroom cloud. BOOM!" or "Pretty mushroom cloud. BYE!"

Sorry. I read this wrong.

How about "He hears a noise above him, BOOM?"

78 posted on 09/21/2001 9:29:05 AM PDT by FrdmLvr
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To: FrdmLvr
How about "He hears a noise above him, BOOM?"

Now it's 8 syllables.

When you're stuck in a hole, stop digging. ;-)

81 posted on 09/21/2001 9:35:47 AM PDT by Physicist (sterner@sterner.hep.upenn.edu)
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