[PJ-Comix]

Great lyrics. But the only line I would change is this:

the USA's crown jewel

With this:

America's crown jewel

It seems to work better that way.

[Maceman]

I agree with your change. Also, I would change the last line to: Save the world for good (instead of make the world feel good)

[Maceman]

Here's the revised version:

Who can take an airplane
a wonderful machine
fill it with fanatics
blow New York to smithereens
The Taliban can
The Taliban can
The Taliban can cause their evil mixed with hate
will make the world no good

Who can take a high rise
America's crown jewel
collapse it in an instant
with a few guys named Abdul
The Taliban can
The Taliban can
The Taliban can cause their evil mixed with hate
will make the world no good

The Taliban makes
everything that's great
terrifying and malicious
brutal and completely vicious
talk about your sons of bitches

Who'll kill these fanatics
send them all to hell
wipe them out till nothing's left
not even their foul smell
The USA can
The USA can
The USA can cause we'll use our righteous rage
and save the world for good