I like yours better.
I like using songs and parodies of them to add some levity and point out certain flaws....much easier to “amend” another’s work than to come up with it by myself...
Came up with this one to mock Yovanoitch with:
Feelings.....Im an emotionally crippled social misfit with no adult coping skills because of my.....Feelings.....Trump hurt my....Feelings.....he has to go because.....my Feelings