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To: Responsibility2nd

“It’s funny that the author wrote this, considering the bad writing and horrible grammar within the article.”

I added the first verb you left out, fixed the issues of the second imprecise verb and its incorrect tense, rearranged the order of your complaints, took out unneeded words bloating your post, and trimmed it into one sentence. Something about glass houses comes to mind.


79 posted on 09/10/2019 5:12:23 AM PDT by SoCal Pubbie (Ca)
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To: SoCal Pubbie

Good for you Pubbie. Now. Go to work on the article itself.

Re-write that into something readable.


80 posted on 09/10/2019 7:40:57 AM PDT by Responsibility2nd
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