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To: SamAdams76

Conservatives live to bitch and moan

Having no lives they create well being by false enhancement of self esteem

Reality doesn’t exist beyond an extremely narrow view of the moment


19 posted on 04/15/2018 8:43:10 AM PDT by bert (RE)
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To: bert
Conservatives live to bitch and moan

Having no lives they create well being by false enhancement of self esteem

Reality doesn’t exist beyond an extremely narrow view of the moment

A traditional format haiku is a three-line poem with seventeen syllables, written in a 5-syllable, 7-syllable, 5-syllable format.

Your valiant attempt to morph that into a bastardized, 9-syllable, 18-syllable, 21-syllable monstrosity has been noted.

That iconoclastic effort garnered attention mainly as an exemplar of "use of chutzpa and hyperbole as a substitute for reasoned analysis", however you lost a lot of points due to the overly-broad brush with which your words were painted.

Nevertheless your effort has been assigned a passing grade.

Next time, please devote more attention to developing and expounding upon your reasoning, and less attention to crafting seemingly novel or creative ways of deploying your invective. Also, be sure to supply references to any primary sources that you may have consulted when developing your analysis.

Moving on to the next homework submission...

68 posted on 04/15/2018 10:07:54 AM PDT by Zeppo ("Happy Pony is on - and I'm NOT missing Happy Pony")
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