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To: markomalley
Excerpt (not the most explicit):

Felicia learned what pleased him.
She tied his arms above his head
with their underclothing and
slapping him sharply when he asked.

“You’re my bitch,” Hugo said, groaning.

5 posted on 09/12/2013 4:47:44 PM PDT by Jeff Chandler (Don't blame me for McCain.)
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To: Jeff Chandler

We’re supposed to be teaching these kids English and good writing skills, and we have a sentence that doesn’t even use the right tense of the verb (”slapping” instead of “slapped”.

I read a bit more from the photo of the book, and the author switches tenses. This author doesn’t even speak correct English.


9 posted on 09/12/2013 5:14:46 PM PDT by butterdezillion (,)
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To: Jeff Chandler
Reads more like something from Dreaming at the White House.
19 posted on 09/12/2013 7:02:07 PM PDT by kitchen (Make plans and prepare. You'll never have trouble if you're ready for it. - TR)
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To: Jeff Chandler

What horrible, turgid drek. And to think only 45 years ago I was reading David Copperfield, The Idiot, Crime and Punishment, Les Miserables, Mythology: Timeless Tales of Gods and Heroes, and Huckleberry Finn in 8th through 10th grades. How far we’ve fallen.


22 posted on 09/12/2013 8:43:21 PM PDT by ProtectOurFreedom
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