Somewhat better? I’ll take your word for it.
“The other two men and Pierce’s girlfriend fled the home after the shooting, the report says.
Puckett and Pierce were taken away in separate ambulances.”
Oh, this is a different bimbo. I thought it was more about the one in Fort Worth.
Is it open season on 17-year-olds or something?
Oh, this is a different bimbo. I thought it was more about the one in Fort Worth.
Is it open season on 17-year-olds or something?
Much better written story.
There is not enough information to determine what happened here. Doesn't sound like your typical “home invasion”. I think these people knew each other. Was the girl a villain or a pawn? Wait for more details. Opinions may change.
The grieving mother was so depressed that she took the time to get all “dolled up” (term used loosely) before she went on camera.
The article look like a bad copy and paste job
It started the paragraph with “The man told deputies “ with out informing the reader who the man is. Apparently theres A man and woman at a house and 3 intruders (2 male and the female victim) came in. The girl held the man and the woman at gun point while the 2 other male ransacked the house