I am astonished at how bad editing has become. For example:
“It was the first time in 125 years that the regular product had been switched from its trademark red cans. “
Man! When I was a boy in the 50’s they didn’t have any Coke cans. Maybe I am not 65, I may really be 125. Huh?
“I am astonished at how bad editing has become. For example:”
Good catch!
Had they simply said “red trademark” it would have been sufficient.