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Final Inspection
Vanity | 11/11/10 | Unknown

Posted on 11/11/2010 2:32:54 PM PST by Mike Darancette

THE FINAL INSPECTION

The soldier stood and faced God, Which must always come to pass. He hoped his shoes were shining, Just as brightly as his brass.

'Step forward now, you soldier, How shall I deal with you ? Have you always turned the other cheek ? To My Church have you been true?'

The soldier squared his shoulders and said, 'No, Lord, I guess I ain't. Because those of us who carry guns, Can't always be a saint.

I've had to work most Sundays, And at times my talk was tough. And sometimes I've been violent, Because the world is awfully rough.

But, I never took a penny, That wasn't mine to keep... Though I worked a lot of overtime, When the bills got just too steep.

And I never passed a cry for help, Though at times I shook with fear. And sometimes, God, forgive me, I've wept unmanly tears.

I know I don't deserve a place, Among the people here. They never wanted me around, Except to calm their fears.

If you've a place for me here, Lord, It needn't be so grand. I never expected or had too much, But if you don't, I'll understand.

There was a silence all around the throne, Where the saints had often trod. As the soldier waited quietly, For the judgment of his God.

'Step forward now, you soldier, You've borne your burdens well. Walk peacefully on Heaven's streets, You've done your time in Hell.'

Author Unknown~


TOPICS: News/Current Events
KEYWORDS: vanity; veterans
Happy Veteran's Day.
1 posted on 11/11/2010 2:32:58 PM PST by Mike Darancette
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To: Mike Darancette

Good post.


2 posted on 11/11/2010 2:39:16 PM PST by Jet Jaguar (*)
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To: Mike Darancette

Many thanks.


3 posted on 11/11/2010 2:41:48 PM PST by Hans
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To: Mike Darancette

Monitor went all blurry on me.

Thanks.


4 posted on 11/11/2010 2:49:50 PM PST by Nervous Tick (Trust in God, but row away from the rocks!)
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To: Mike Darancette

Outstanding


5 posted on 11/11/2010 2:50:24 PM PST by antidemoncrat
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To: Nervous Tick; Mike Darancette

Me too dammit.

Thanks


6 posted on 11/11/2010 3:04:10 PM PST by onona (dbada)
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To: Nervous Tick

Must be those cheap east-asian components.


7 posted on 11/11/2010 3:09:46 PM PST by OneWingedShark (Q: Why am I here? A: To do Justly, to love mercy, and to walk humbly with my God.)
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To: Mike Darancette

That was great.


8 posted on 11/11/2010 3:14:04 PM PST by esoteric
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To: Mike Darancette

Kiplingesque.

A Remembrance/Armistice Day Thank You to all veterans.


9 posted on 11/11/2010 3:31:23 PM PST by Argus
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To: Mike Darancette

Great post! Thanks


10 posted on 11/11/2010 3:33:11 PM PST by Faith65 (Jesus Christ is my Lord and Savior!)
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To: Mike Darancette

He was getting old and paunchy;
And his hair was falling fast,
And he sat around the Legion,
Telling stories of the past.

Of a war that he had fought in,
And the deeds that he had done.
In his exploits with his buddies;
They were heroes, everyone.

And ‘tho sometimes, to his neighbors,
His tales became a joke.
All his buddies listened,
For they knew whereof he spoke.

But we’ll hear his tales no longer,
For ol’ Bob has passed away,
And the world’s a little poorer,
For a soldier died today.

He won’t be mourned by many,
Just his children and his wife.
For he lived an ordinary...
Very quiet sort of life.

He held a job and raised a family,
Quietly going on his way.
And the world won’t note his passing,
‘Tho a Soldier died today.

When politicians leave this earth,
Their bodies lie in state.
While thousands note their passing,
And proclaim that they were great.

Papers tell of their life stories,
From the time that they were young.
But the passing of a soldier,
Goes unnoticed, and unsung.

Is the greatest contribution,
To the welfare of our land,
Some jerk who breaks his promise,
And cons his fellow man?

Or the ordinary fellow,
Who in times of war and strife,
Goes off to serve his Country...
And offers up his life?

The politician’s stipend,
And the style in which he lives,
Are sometimes disproportionate,
To the service he gives.

While the ordinary soldier,
Who offered up his all,
Is paid off with a medal,
And perhaps a pension...small.

It’s so easy to forget them,
For it is so long ago,
That our Bob’s and Jim’s and Johnny’s,
Went to battle, but we know.

It was not the politicians,
With their compromise and ploys;
Who won for us the freedom,
That our Country now enjoys.

Should you find yourself in danger,
With your enemies at hand;
Would you really want some cop-out,
With his ever waffling stand?

Or would you want a Soldier,
Who has sworn to defend,
His home, his kin and Country,
And would fight until the end?

He was just a common Soldier,
And his ranks are growing thin.
But his presence should remind us,
We may need his like again.

For when countries are in conflict,
Then we find the Soldier’s part,
Is to clean up all the troubles,
That the politicians start.

If we cannot do him honor,
While he’s here to hear the praise.
Then at least let’s give him homage,
At the ending of his days.

Perhaps just a simple headline,
In the paper that might say,
“OUR COUNTRY IS IN MOURNING,
FOR A SOLDIER DIED TODAY.”

Author Unknown


11 posted on 11/11/2010 4:21:49 PM PST by struwwelpeter
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To: Mike Darancette
Veterans
12 posted on 11/11/2010 6:27:42 PM PST by BobP (The piss-stream media - Never to be watched again in my house)
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To: struwwelpeter

Thank you!! That was beautiful.


13 posted on 11/11/2010 6:57:27 PM PST by Dianer0839 (Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel will now be turned off.)
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To: Mike Darancette
Thank you for sharing this and my most sincere thanks to ALL who served this country throughout its history. Throughout history you will continue to be honored as the Heroes and Patriots that you are.
14 posted on 11/11/2010 11:52:46 PM PST by ADemocratNoMore (Jeepers, Freepers, where'd 'ya get those sleepers?. Pj people, exposing old media's lies.)
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To: Mike Darancette

God bless our veterans, now and always!


15 posted on 11/12/2010 6:21:36 AM PST by PatriotGirl827 (Lord Jesus, direct my mind, possess my heart, transform my life)
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